Swimming Pool

In the weekend my family and I went to the pool. It was a hot day. We jumped into the water. We swam around in the deep pool. We splashed water at each other. We had a great time.
                                                         By Patrick

Day At the Beach

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach. It was a hot day so I went for a swim. I played in the sand and I made a big sandcastle. I put shells on it. Then we had sausages and bread for lunch. We packed up and went back home.
                                                        by Patrick

Mission Day

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.
Success criteria: I can do this when I 

• write my events in order
• use linking words
• use describing words

On Mission day I bought lollies and cakes. The cake tasted like chocolate. The lollies were sweet and crunchy. My brother painted my face like Captain America.
I enjoyed myself.
                                                By Patrick

Family Outing

In the weekend my family and I went to the pool. my dad took pictures of us playing in the pool. Then we went to KFC to have lunch. I ate burgers, chips,and chicken. I liked the chicken because it was crispy. After that we went back home and watched tv. We had a great time.
                                                             by Patrick