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Wednesday, 29 April 2020

My Favourite Ice Cream


My favourite ice-cream is strawberry. It tastes delicious just like real strawberry.                      
                                                    by Patrick

Thursday, 16 April 2020

Describe a Picture



Learning goal: I am learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: I can do this when I

  • use describing words
  • use powerful verbs
The sea was very rough. The waves crashed into the boat. The boat bobbed high and dipped low. The water splashed into the boat. Everyone was scared.
                                                   By Patrick

Swimming Pool


In the weekend my family and I went to the pool. It was a hot day. We jumped into the water. We swam around in the deep pool. We splashed water at each other. We had a great time.
                                                         By Patrick

Day At the Beach

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach. It was a hot day so I went for a swim. I played in the sand and I made a big sandcastle. I put shells on it. Then we had sausages and bread for lunch. We packed up and went back home.
                                                        by Patrick

The King Lion


I am learning to write about the part of the story that I like the best.

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the King Lion told his grandson, he will be the king one day. I liked it because the King Lion loved his grandson.
                                                   By Patrick

Mission Day


Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount.
Success criteria: I can do this when I 

  • write my events in order
  • use linking words
  • use describing words

On Mission day I bought lollies and cakes. The cake tasted like chocolate. The lollies were sweet and crunchy. My brother painted my face like Captain America.
I enjoyed myself.
                                                By Patrick

Tuesday, 5 November 2019

Popcorn



We cooked popcorn. It popped like a firecracker. It smelt delicious and buttery. The popcorn looked yellow and lumpy. It felt warm and tasted salty, nutty and buttery. It was yummy.
                                                        by Patrick